Evening of the first day, the man who owned a truck yard
next door laid out plywood sheets on hard ground and said
Come— And all the neighbors came, bringing blankets,
sheets, canvas tarp, burlap— The very young and the trembling
old slept in vehicles, windows cracked open for air—
And the night air was notched with metallic smells but also
something almost sweet, like flowers— I did not want
to think what kind– And the following day it rained,
and then again the next, so between aftershocks we collected
water in pails and tin drums— Someone had a kerosene stove
and lit it in the shadow of the broken shed where the honeysuckle
vines were a vivid green interspersed with orange— And still
we refused to go indoors, though gradually we crept
back to those parts of our homes still standing— Porches
were good for sleeping— When the sun glimmered
through thin clouds we heard news of a few places
where we could walk to line up for bread, rice,
canned goods— And someone had busted a water pipe
near the park (just a little they said) and people went
with cans and plastic tubs for water— And the men
came back weeping, having dug out bodies from collapsed
buildings, from vehicles overtaken by landslides
on the mountain road— And strangers offered
rides, and helicopters hovered in the sky— And we heard
lamentations and questions on the lips of everyone— Faces
streaked often and easily, eyes filling with tears and blinking
not from the sunlight but from what they could barely endure—
—Luisa A. Igloria
03 15 2011
In response to today’s Morning Porch entry.
OTHER POSTS IN THE SERIES
- Stay
- “Findings”: the missing Morning Porch poems
- Two more Morning Porch poems from Luisa Igloria and a comment on free culture
- What Leaf
- With winter’s gift of unimpeded sight,
- Aubade, with Feathers
- Scherenschnitte
- Solstice
- Heart and Shadow
- “The sudden spasm of wings”
- “Before sight, sound—“
- Four Morning Porch poems
- “Up and down the street, the neighbors…”
- Memento Mori
- “The streets are lined with garbage bins…”
- “Soon the old year must join…”
- Speaking of __
- Postcard
- Wake
- Despedida de Soltera
- Filament
- “Paired or unpaired, all in the world…”
- Vertices
- Graupel
- Auguries
- Closer
- Menage
- Instructions
- Consonance
- Rosary
- Forager
- Photogram
- [poem temporarily hidden by author]
- Landscape, With Darkness and Hare
- Ghazal of the Dark Water
- Landscape, with Cardinal and Earring
- Intention
- After
- One Day, That Room
- Landscape, with Small Flakes and Far-off Bandoneón
- Sentence
- Spun
- Intercession
- Recurrence
- Landscape, with an End and a Beginning
- Waking
- Thaw
- Spell
- Dim Sun, Dim Sum
- Vanishing Point
- Monday Landscape, with Clocks Borrowed from Dali
- “Last night’s wet snow…”
- Ephemera
- Landscape, with Water Fountain, Small Clouds and Endless Lyric
- What She Wants
- Landscape, with Mockingbird and Ripe Figs
- Letter to Arrythmia
- Love Poem with Skull and Candy Valentines
- Letter to Affliction
- Letter to Levity
- Thaw
- Letter to Rubbermaid and Tupperware
- Letter to Spam
- Ellipsis
- Nave
- Little Waking Song
- Imminence
- Letter to Water
- Letter to Green
- Meditation on a Seam
- No Two
- Ghazal of Burgeoning Things
- Deseo
- Petition for Something Other than White
- Letter to the Hungry Ghosts
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Thanks for this vivid recollection, Luisa. The accumulation of small, telling details is very effective and affecting. “And the night air was notched with metallic smells but also//something almost sweet, like flowers—” “And strangers offered/rides, and helicopters hovered in the sky—” Lines like these make it clear how different the world becomes after a disaster.
Seeing all the news and the imagery from the earthquake and tsunamis in Japan vividly brings back my own memories of the two 8.8 earthquakes we experienced in my home city, Baguio in the Philippines, on July 16, 1990…
Here is a link to some photos of the 1990 earthquakes in Baguio City, Philippines (my home city). http://www.cityofpines.com/baguioquake/quake.html
Baguio City looks like a stunning city in ordinary times — but then, Sendai was regarded at the most liveable city in Japan, the City of Trees (and not far from Matsushima). I’m interested to see that Baguio City’s nickname is City of Pines.