so what if i haven’t
given up, if i keep
testing this voice
on the edge of the wind,
stringing versions of what
i’m trying to say, revising,
then taking it all back,
tomorrow and tomorrow?
don’t listen if you don’t
want to, if to you
it’s nothing. pretend
it’s the rain; something
background you
can sleep through.
In response to Via Negativa: Active Voice.